When you create something you love, it’s natural sometimes to spill over, going on and on about the benefits of it. I see this sometimes when coaches, healers and creatives write about their offers.
They see the value of this service and want so badly to share it with others that sometimes they lose focus in their copy, and by extension, lose sight of the purpose of the offer. They talk about everything the program can, and might, and could, do.
You can see their enthusiasm.
Unfortunately, though, that type of marketing copy isn't very effective…




